@Uthhra
You can use Split() to display a string inside a gallery, eg
// gallery items
Split( wstring, ",")
Note: I'd remove the space at the end of your Concat string creation ie "," instead of ", ". Will just help the Split do it's work
For saving to SP, you could try replacing "," with "<br>" inside your wstring, eg
// example Patch, re-shape to suit your needs
Patch(
yourdatasource,
Defaults(yourdatasource),
{
...
multiLineColumnName: Substitute( wstring, ",", "<br>")
...
}
)