Re: Formatting an Array to Place in SharePoint List Item
Hi @nathanisaacson
Pls refer the below sample flow:
Here I have taken 'MultiChoiceCol' as a multichoice filed in SP list.
In "Apply to each" action (loop), add a "Select" action which will collect the values of multichoice field in a collection or array:

Next, in the update item action, pass the output of 'Select' action in the multichoice field value. First click 'Switch to input entire array' button:

and now pass the output of select action in the multichoice field value.

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Thanks